by tears i cry Sep 30, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I say I dont care what he thinks of me |
by Hollymariee
I love the idea of the poem , it's really good . I don't like the last stanza though .. You could use the second last one as your conclusion and it would sound better . There are alot of issues with the flow .. Maybe do a syllable check ? really well done .. 4/5 |
by Max Krakers
First things first, the poem is lovely. It had a nice ring to it and got your feelings across. but there were a lot of small mistakes. |