by Lady Nik Oct 1, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Sweet love sing me a verse |
This was pretty good, I didnt think it was rusty at all. A truly beautiful love poem, about becoming one with someone you love. Being their love forever is very fulfilling and a wonderful feeling i'd imagine. Such a sweet, delicate write from you. |
by kelleyana
Filled with intense emotions. I think it's the first time i red your poems, and this one is my first from you, so let me read along to discover your writing styles. Well done, i like it kel. |
by Hollymariee
This is very sweet and shows a situation we all desire . I think you're an amazing writter , and you should most definately keep it up . The only thing I don't understand is why you break some lines in two, maybe so it reads faster ? Either way , very well done . 5/5 |
by Reaper
Good job!!!.great poem!.like alway's |
"I am you. |