"I am you.
An extension of your
being. You are
beautiful, my dearest
heart. Life is but a word
without you near me."

Wow such a beautiful poem. How do you write stanza's like that. That's amazing hun!! Everything just seems to click when you write it. Amazing write 5/5

Good job!!!.great poem!.like alway's

This is very sweet and shows a situation we all desire . I think you're an amazing writter , and you should most definately keep it up . The only thing I don't understand is why you break some lines in two, maybe so it reads faster ? Either way , very well done . 5/5

Filled with intense emotions. I think it's the first time i red your poems, and this one is my first from you, so let me read along to discover your writing styles. Well done, i like it kel.

This was pretty good, I didnt think it was rusty at all. A truly beautiful love poem, about becoming one with someone you love. Being their love forever is very fulfilling and a wonderful feeling i'd imagine. Such a sweet, delicate write from you.