by AwingAshes Oct 2, 2009
category :
Life, society /
about society
Runaway, Love. |
by Lady Nik
I agree with Frank. Very good use of words in this piece dear. I love how you repeat the word run, it gives the illusion that something is moving. I felt you told a story and ended it well. A new style for me but still one I enjoyed. Each poem I read from you, gives me a better understanding of who you are and I really like that. Great work hun :) Nik |