Another Tool in the Shed

Wow. I got so absorbed in the functions of tools and how they make humans unique to other species, I did not see your comparison between tools and humans coming. Great way to introduce a subject and give it life then transform it into a representation of how people are often treated... USED, to be specific. So much about friendships these days is superficial - people think, "Hm, how can this person benefit me? What are they good for? How can I use them?" It's too bad.
This is personification at its finest. Again, awesome word choices and way to use them accurately! You've got talent, that's for sure.

Very well done. It's really interesting on your choice of a metaphor. comparing a woman to grass and that all the men that she toys with are just her tools.

I must say that it really comes though and I really enjoyed it. Really well done and I thought that the poem had a good flow.

5/5

Thanks for your comment on my poem.

I loved this poem!
i can relate to the feeling and i like the metaphor, it makes alot of sense.
this was beautifully written..im guessing out of pain..emotions always deliver the best poems!

A very interesting analogy for being used. it seems to work well and helps to fully understand how you feel. you did a good job with this.

~Ben

OMG ! thats an awsome portrayal of being used. I just went through the same thing and your words echo my feelings. very nicely done