by groovydude
OMG ! thats an awsome portrayal of being used. I just went through the same thing and your words echo my feelings. very nicely done |
by Kuro
A very interesting analogy for being used. it seems to work well and helps to fully understand how you feel. you did a good job with this. |
I loved this poem! |
by Dark Savior
Very well done. It's really interesting on your choice of a metaphor. comparing a woman to grass and that all the men that she toys with are just her tools. |
by silvershoes
Wow. I got so absorbed in the functions of tools and how they make humans unique to other species, I did not see your comparison between tools and humans coming. Great way to introduce a subject and give it life then transform it into a representation of how people are often treated... USED, to be specific. So much about friendships these days is superficial - people think, "Hm, how can this person benefit me? What are they good for? How can I use them?" It's too bad. |