Comments : Another Tool in the Shed

  • 15 years ago

    by groovydude

    OMG ! thats an awsome portrayal of being used. I just went through the same thing and your words echo my feelings. very nicely done

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    A very interesting analogy for being used. it seems to work well and helps to fully understand how you feel. you did a good job with this.

    ~Ben

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    I loved this poem!
    i can relate to the feeling and i like the metaphor, it makes alot of sense.
    this was beautifully written..im guessing out of pain..emotions always deliver the best poems!

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very well done. It's really interesting on your choice of a metaphor. comparing a woman to grass and that all the men that she toys with are just her tools.

    I must say that it really comes though and I really enjoyed it. Really well done and I thought that the poem had a good flow.

    5/5

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Wow. I got so absorbed in the functions of tools and how they make humans unique to other species, I did not see your comparison between tools and humans coming. Great way to introduce a subject and give it life then transform it into a representation of how people are often treated... USED, to be specific. So much about friendships these days is superficial - people think, "Hm, how can this person benefit me? What are they good for? How can I use them?" It's too bad.
    This is personification at its finest. Again, awesome word choices and way to use them accurately! You've got talent, that's for sure.