Dance with me ( Waltz Wave)

by Ingrid   Oct 3, 2009


Dance with me ( Waltz Wave)

Dance
With me
Dance
Hold me
Sway to sounds
So sweet
Spin
Across
The dance floor
In soft embrace
Skin to skin
Kisses
Wet
From lips
So divine
My body
Yearns
For your
Touch

This form is named for LeoWaltz...Pattern: 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1...

* I got the idea for this format from my fellow poetess Samia (Genuine Lavender).

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    You have written such a 'real' poem here Ingrid.
    A poem that makes me feel like I am actually dancing on a floor somewhere, with this lady in my arms, as I read each word that you have written.
    You have given this poem a life of its own, and placed me into a world of dreamy thoughts and wishes. Wonderful work Ingrid!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Incredible! The flow of this piece is amazing - almost hectic. Obviously the brilliant structure adds heavily to that and the content itself is superb. Added to favourites.
    All the best, Ingrid.

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Can you imagine that I was searching for this format and your poem appeared?

    I hope everything is OK on your side dear lady, it's been so long but you were always in my thoughts. Glad to see your beautiful poetry on this site :)

    Samia

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice execution of the form!

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    The staccato rhythm lends itself wonderfully to this sensual poem of yearning and desire. Superb.

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