by Lady Nik Oct 4, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
How can you say you love me |
I loved how it started off smooth then your emotions and feelings really started to kick in. |
How our fates surely change.. i know you dont want to hear from me.. and i dont blame you i broke your heart its what i deserve.. well this is and will be the last time i will ever bother you and or anyone.. so yeah.. im sorry but im gonna have to break my promise okay.. i just dont want to feel again so yeah.. ill end it all.. with one last flick of the wrist.. goodbye shanik.. forever.. |
by Reaper
Wow.sad wonderful poem.love u nik |
Hey! Thanks so much for the comment on "I am the winter". If you could comment on more, I would love it. I can't do as thorough as a critique as you did, because this is longer, but I will do my best... |
by HvN
I can definitely relate, great job! 5/5 |