Comments : One Hundred Percent

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem is very good apart from it needed to be restructured and also some punctuations are missing, but i get what you are trying to say. What i can say to you is that, always believe that you are unique and don't care less what the world think of you, just keep your head high. kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I too hate the racism bullcrap and ur right it shouldn't. don't let it get you down just be proud of who you are and i think you did a good job of showing that.

    Raindrops~5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by AwingAshes

    This was for sure one of the way better racism poems that I fell justify the cruel act.
    You stated the words crazy good.
    Made us understand from your point of you.
    Good work, love :)

    -JaggaLove