The Last Time

by The Dark Poet   Oct 6, 2009


So we were starting something and you decieved me
Said there was a possibility, but you were using me
I was nothing more to you than a tool
You used me pretty good you took me for a fool
You are one of those girls that give the others a bad name
But it seems you are one of the types I always seems to attract
The ones that don't care the one that cause pain
The ones who instead of sheltering throw you out in the rain
Your heart is like ice you're a cold hearted killer
Youre so scared to love again you remind me of the thriller
For me I'm not afraid there's just too much damn pain
The amount your throwing at me is making me go insane
But I know I'll have to bear it
Your hate I'll ensure it
Trying to destroy me
I'll just flip it
Make you feel the same pain maybe
Make you cozy up to me and drop the bomb
Make you know you aren't my one and only but my second one
Everything you I'll throw back double
Take you off your high horse it's time to bust your damn bubble.
Remember true days we used to cuddle
Those days are no more
You caused my heart too much trouble
Now your antics are a bore
You pushed me one time too far
Thats something as rare as a four leafed clover
So as much as you try now to melt the ice on your heart
My hearts hell has frozen over

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Dark Poet

    K...Ill try ! Thankies!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    You used me pretty good you took me for a fool

    *I'd change "good" to "well" That's proper grammer and it sounds better*

    Youre so scared to love again you remind me of the thriller

    *I didn't like this line. It seems like it was there just to rhyme. I'd change it, I don't see why you put it there*

    Everything you I'll throw back double

    *Again with this one. I don't see the point. I think you left out a word. I didn't like this one that much. You repeated yourself alot and that made your poem kind of boring. You said "ice" and "heart" alot. I'd work on finding replacements for that. This would be so much better if your diction was stronger, you should work on that.* Nik