You used me pretty good you took me for a fool

*I'd change "good" to "well" That's proper grammer and it sounds better*

Youre so scared to love again you remind me of the thriller

*I didn't like this line. It seems like it was there just to rhyme. I'd change it, I don't see why you put it there*

Everything you I'll throw back double

*Again with this one. I don't see the point. I think you left out a word. I didn't like this one that much. You repeated yourself alot and that made your poem kind of boring. You said "ice" and "heart" alot. I'd work on finding replacements for that. This would be so much better if your diction was stronger, you should work on that.* Nik

K...Ill try ! Thankies!