False Hopes

by Samuel Dimafelix   Oct 6, 2009


I am nothing for those who really doesnt know a selfless man
who only know is to be with joy
a lucky go happy that what they told

living without hopes's
breathing without soul
become a man with no goals
having being fed with false hopes
a crazy man thats what i've been told

a lost soul in the midst of a straight goal
having a hard time to impose
what was i would be supposed

asking question
but finding no solution
what would be i have to know
to find any answers to the unknown

feeling alone with nothing to grip a single lit
to give me something to leap
but it was all nothing
but just a single weep
a lost soul in the midst of a false hope's

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  • 15 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    This is one of the best poems i have read in ages. Good job :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    :( aww such sad poetry hun. I want some more love poems from you. You write with sure intensity and emotions. I love it. I feel like you really put your feelings out there and that's what makes a poem good. Keep writing sweetie. Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    We are truly never alone, although it may feel like it. This was a truly wonderful write, I felt your pain and emotion as I read your poem. I hope life gets better for you, it's sad how at times we all think this way and how hope is not in the equation. We see the negatives of life, and fail to see the positive. But in time, we become more optimistic and realize we are not alone, and this pain is lifted. I hope that this is just a poem and not true, but if it is I wish you all the best. I hope everything gets better. Welcome to the site, btw. Really a pleasure to read your work. (:

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    So much painful, powerful and emotional words. Well written, 5/5. Em

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