by XxBeautiful NightmareXx Oct 7, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Who am I ? |
by sadeyes
Well written I like it very much |
We all hold an ascribed status from birth and with each we have a role along with achieved statuses. I liked the idea of your and i dont mean to be a critic but just a suggestion maybe you could elaborate on each person you are a little i really think your poem would shine if you did that. Nice write by way^^ |