Did that come from what i told you?
If it did im glad. I can see those little ripples in the tides the things you lose as you become of age. We gain responsibility not only to ourselves but also other people and when others let us down we feel bad when it should be them who should feel the pain that they deserve. 5/5

OMGUDNESS... this is such a touching write.... It went straight to my heart Lolol. Very well written and expressed... Ending was superb :) Well done! Youve got talent :)

This is excellent