Am amazed.. gosh really I LUV IT... its totally my fav. style in writtin poems like that... it is full of meanin behind it .. the sentences are freakin great, this poem is very strong ... i wish that otherz would also understand its meanin... und imagination is very wide thats gr8 and az i can guess ur a deep thinker and a clever person :)

Wow Kris. I like IT:)
I did get a tinsy bit scared while reading it though.. lol. Good Job. Keep it up!

Wow great writer!

OH MY GOSH!!!! man, you have got so much talent , and i know i sad that to you before but your writing sends chills up my spine. it is absolutely amazing!! each poem is absolutely genius!! i love your whimsical style of writing!! this had me captivated from start to finish. truly incredible!! i really wish i could give more than just 5 because your writing deserves so much more!!