Loved it...deep...good job

Very well written it was worded great

I really liked the imagery with the moon... i could see you running with the blue hue shining down... awsome job!
5/5!

I really liked the idea behind this poem. and the imagary was great

This was such a sad piece Ken but so full of emotion. I love how easliy your lines flow and how well your express yourself. I really enjoyed this piece. Keep it up. Nik

Aw. . .this was so sad but such a wonderful piece i mean realizing yourself as your biggest fear was a message that i got and really liked you did a great job it was deep and somewhat haunting