Hit The Floor

by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not   Oct 10, 2009


He hits you again, you love him more
Every hate-filled punch, you hit the floor
You plead with tears down each cheek
He hits you again, a pure control freak

Yet you still see only the good side
Until his fist; your face collide
His fist stains your face more
Yet he's still the one you adore

Blood running down your face
Scars that you can never erase
Loving him, you will never know
How true love is supposed to go.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Donna

    Close to my own heart this one ...Sad but true words. i sense your word comng from the heart and personal to you or ones you know ....

  • 15 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    Wow...that was great..the flow and emotions...well done...there's always so much feeling in your poems...I love it....simply love it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    I love this poem. it's very powerful and sad. good job!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    So sad :( I can't relate to this but I can to loving someone that hurts you. I think you did an amazing job with this hun. Very nice eork Shaun, *huggles* Nik

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