What I loved most about this poem is that it didnt rhyme lol. Most people think that in order for it to be poetry, it has to have rhyme. WRONG. I consider this a great poem for the fact that it showed emotion and your usage of vocabulary was great. 5/5

This was a wonderful poem and I loved the iamgery here. I think you did an amazing job with telling a story here and the way you ended this was simply flawless. I agree with the person above, your poem doesn't have to rhyme to be great and this was indeed a wonderful poem. You write with such intensity and emotions. I love it. One of your best I have to say. Keep it up hun. Nik