Comments : Tinted Heart

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I really liked this one from you. I love the flow, the style and the rhyme. Most of all, I like the ending because it speaks alot to me.
    "I need to breath, i need fresh unpolluted air
    I need to sidestep your Prison you call "Love"
    I need superfluous Justice, though so rare
    I need my dusty wings back so fly free as a Dove
    I dont need ur love, I need someone who will be fair" - flawless. 5/5, Em