You must be feeling pretty low to write all these depressing poems all at once. i hope you feel better,but that doesn't mean much coming from me.

about the poem: "With death in, I slite my wrist...now say goodnight."

^ that seems like an awkward line. the first 3 words do not make sense, also "slite" is misspelled. its supposed to be "SLIT". also elipsies are not really nessecary. if you want to make a dramatic pause, either use a comma or go to the next line. that way when the reader reads it, the pause is more effective. but thats my opinion

Oh ok thx ben

Wow. this was very very good. i liked it alot. its one of those poems i can relate to because ive been in that situation before and i know what its like.

Kool! thanks amelia. thats great that you can relate to it.

Exactly wat i intended