by Cindy Oct 12, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Darkness Descends |
by Mr Rhee
I must say, this was a very fun piece to read. All the suffering for all that time, darkness would be a relief from the torment. Almost, as though, the the long, hard torture is coming to an end, of a sort. I think you hit some of those pains right on. Thank you. |
by Emotiionsz
Ooooooooohh the LAST VERSE WAS AMAZING!!! |
Woah...this one really made me stand on my toes. What a great scary piece. Just like your love poems take me to a sweet fairy land...your dark poems take me places i would rather not mention... :) |
Sorry I wasn't done before I hit submit. |
You definitely have a grip on dark poetry. Wonderfully done. I could feel the hairs raising on my neck |