I felt like I pulled into a sinister world of
hauntings that leaves the person tattered..
well done!

Cindy, this is a dark one. Made me have goosebumps. (smiles) You captured the essence of darkness descending on a soul. Well done.

This is EXCELLENT Cindy.
Thank you for commenting on my song. I'm so glad you listened - and continue to listen to my music.

You definitely have a grip on dark poetry. Wonderfully done. I could feel the hairs raising on my neck

Sorry I wasn't done before I hit submit.

There is lots of evil that we can relate to in this world and you wrote this just in time for Halloween. What a spooky write. Great Job!

Love you,
Kay

Woah...this one really made me stand on my toes. What a great scary piece. Just like your love poems take me to a sweet fairy land...your dark poems take me places i would rather not mention... :)

You should have mentioned along with the title (Not for people with weak hearts)

Loved it

all the best and take care

Ooooooooohh the LAST VERSE WAS AMAZING!!!

beautiful technique in writing your words just keep luring me in! I loved it!

I must say, this was a very fun piece to read. All the suffering for all that time, darkness would be a relief from the torment. Almost, as though, the the long, hard torture is coming to an end, of a sort. I think you hit some of those pains right on. Thank you.