I think the message here is amazing. It does definitely make one think about the complaints we make regarding what we don't have. We have EVERYTHING compared to what some people have.

My thoughts...I think the comment you made everything they have being burried 6 feet under from aids was a little random. If you're going to write about a particular topic and problem that upsets you then you should be more specific using more details to the direct problem. I was reading the poem and was thrown off by that comment as I have no idea what you were talking about. Just my thoughts. Other than that...I like this write. I like to read thought provoking poetry and this surely was one of those. Good luck! :)