Ineedyou.where'dyougo?

I have that feeling of wanting someone to be with me. this poem somehow talks to me in a way.

it has only a few words written on it but, it hits hard.

good job. keep up. ^_^

Now this was perfection! Great job with the rhyme and flow. While I was reading, I got caught up with the voice. A secret love all in its own, and I was truely amazed.

"I love the way you look at me,
as if I'm what you need.
I wish that you would take my hand,
and tell me about all dreams."
^^my favorite stanza

Great poem. I loved it from start to finish. So this one deserves a 5. Good job :]

And just sit there,
- you should try and make this a bit longer .

Otherwise great rhyming , and I like the whole "sands of time" thing . You express yourself really well . 5/5

How sad. Your emotions can be felt in the words you have penned.

Now your walking away,
and I'm pretending i don't care.
I'm looking blankly at the ground.
saying i need you to be here.

The ending brought a tear to my eye.
Good job!
Take Care
Cindy

I really like this one.. I can relate to this alot.. there is good flow through most of it. Wonderfully written though