This was a very emotional piece from you.

I wonder how I'll stop the tears that clog my soul at the very thought of a world that doesn't include you.
^^I could not read it any farther with ease.

I loved the ending too, very touching.

Wow i just got out of a relationship with the mother of my son. and let me just tell you if i could express how i feel now it would all be in this poem. good job!!! i love it