by StonedGooberz Oct 15, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My memories of a better time |
This was an excellent write. Feelings flowed like no other in this one. I felt it in every word I read. |
by Jad
This was a good poem and the words which you spoke are true . The emotion is felt by many and you put it nicely. The flow was good as so was the rhyming scheme which you kept constant. The poem was good all in all so good job. |