This was a good poem and the words which you spoke are true . The emotion is felt by many and you put it nicely. The flow was good as so was the rhyming scheme which you kept constant. The poem was good all in all so good job.

This was an excellent write. Feelings flowed like no other in this one. I felt it in every word I read.
The flow was good, the rhyming was nice.
It is hard when you're changing to have someone understand that you still want them by your side.
Great write. 5/5