by Black Heart Still Beating Oct 15, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Left. |
by Brittany C
So far this is my favorite. The wording was good and so was the flow. The rhyming was nice and didn't seem forced. Liked the length and it was easy to read and understand. It is also relate able. |
by victoria
Very interesting. i like this style. i really like the ending how you wrapped it up. great work! |
Fallow the Cars, |
Well written. |