Well written.
I loved it. =D

I can see why you like it. ;)
Thanks for the WinkWink NudgeNudge. Lol.

xx

Fallow the Cars,
Fallow the Bikes,
Fallow the Lines,
Fallow the Wind,

you spelt it wrong its follow
over all your way young but you got talent keep it up 5/5

Very interesting. i like this style. i really like the ending how you wrapped it up. great work!

victoria

So far this is my favorite. The wording was good and so was the flow. The rhyming was nice and didn't seem forced. Liked the length and it was easy to read and understand. It is also relate able.

Gave it a 5/5