Diary of a Torn Heart

This is truly wonderful. Written beautifully with alot of emotion and intriguing words. Loved it, 5/5. Em

Silently sitting, staring into the void
shards of yesterday flash the mind
emotionless and numb, frozen in place
minutes turn to hours as the memories
like uninvited guests refuse to take their leave.

I like this verse very much..memories can be
happy & at the same time painful to hold onto..a very sad write, take care.

I loved this. cannot really comment more because this poem seems perfect the way it is. I mean what i said, it's not flattery.

5/5.

Anthony
What a very sad emotion filled piece.

Silently sitting, staring into the void
shards of yesterday flash the mind
emotionless and numb, frozen in place
minutes turn to hours as the memories
like uninvited guests refuse to take their leave.

The memories that seem to break our hearts over and over again seem to be the ones that find us when we are most vunrable.

Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Sad memories can tear our hearts apart and we tend to relive them like reading the pages of a dairy. Well done.