by Benny Boi Oct 16, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The choice is made, |
by Crystal
Shit ay bennyboi.... |
by HidinVictim
I like this piece, for some reason it really touched me. But, I will say i think that the last line of the second stanza threw things off alot, You might thing about changing it or taking that line out all together. The Flow works much better in my oppion without it.. 4/5 |