by Chloe Johnson Oct 16, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The rain falls gently on the roof |
I loved this poem, the simplicity of it all and the emotions it carry along with your words. Keep writing! XD |
by KJ
This was a pretty nice flow. It was well put together I must say. Also, you did an amazing job with your choice of vocabulary; not too complex, yet saying so much. I gave this a 5. It was well deserved. |