This piece captures a moment in time and has filled my head with beautiful images, and a smile upon my face. After reading it a few times, it has a couple extra filler words but works well in this beautiful piece. Great job!!

Later in the night
as a warm breeze blew
we walked along the beach
pants rolled up, carrying our shoes

^^ I loved the imagery in this..every time I hear about a couple on the beach this is what I picture! Pants rolled up, holding hands, breeze blowing...Loved it! Ughhh I wish I lived somewhere warmmm and beachy!
Great write!!

I agree the imagery was perfect and i could almost feel myself walking on the same beach wishing for the sand between my toes. I am sure the sunrise was exciting as well. peace Willow