by Karl Wild GG23 Oct 17, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Today I awoke to the sun rising off the shore of Thailand, |
by Kristina
Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5 |
Wow the first three stanzas raced through my mind to be ohnest such flow. Your ending though was when everything slowed down and had the biggest impact on me truly nice work. |
by Wereallbladesarntwe
Lovely, just Lovely xP |
by Rachel RTVW
THe song Nothing Compares To You comes to mind when reading this beautiful piece. Excellent imagery and I love the ending. I am sure whoever inspired this piece will be touched by this. Great job! |
I loved this poem as it describes how much love of someone can colour and brighten your world in so many different ways. I enjoyed the ride and the way it was put together and especially the qualifier at its end 5/5 |