by Lu Oct 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You carved our names in paper - |
I hate to compare you to another poet, but Melpomene's & your styles are so similar and equally amazing. I get addicted to your poetry & hers so easily. Anyways, another really awesome write. The "To the man, I hate, to love." was the perfect ending & was extremely powerful. Another awesome write from you, filled with emotion --wonderfully done. |
I want to add but no more can i add but your a great poet |
by Nee
Oh..such beautiful ending Luu!! |
Awwww!! it's beautiful!! I loooove it!!! its filled with so many emotionss!! Great jobbb! |
by Ingrid
Love na hate lie so close together, Luanne....and when we love a man deeply, it can turn to bitter hate at times when he lets us down... |