by ReBecca
Oh Lu...that was incredible. I adored the ending! The metaphor of the tarnished goblet representing a love that has been betrayed or abused is great! |
by The Queen
It's much too painful |
by The Queen
It's much too painful |
by Melpomene
I am actually speechless with this piece Lu, I am amazed about how beautiful you wrote this. I must say, in my eyes your poetry just improves and improves. What an elegant and beautiful piece. Although i'm speechless i'm going to attempt to leave you a comment on this poem anyway. |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent use of a metaphor. Good imagery. This piece is very clever and unique. Nice job! |
An excellent metaphoric poem though I am querulous were, 'you carved our name in paper', came from, poetic license at it best, the sympathy votes of course coming from women, though men do get ditched regularly by women so we to can sympathise with you. A lovely written poem which drew me in with its flow and got me feeling the pain and defeat as it was meant to. 5/5 |
by HidinVictim
Wow... This makes me wanna cry, I can really relate to this right now. Beautifully written and great imagery by the way. Oh! And I love the title, it really catches the eye |
by Lonely Rider
This one is definately going into my favorites.... its so so beautiful... I just couldnt explain how i felt while reading it... expressions so prfectly described... |
by Ingrid
Love na hate lie so close together, Luanne....and when we love a man deeply, it can turn to bitter hate at times when he lets us down... |
Awwww!! it's beautiful!! I loooove it!!! its filled with so many emotionss!! Great jobbb! |
by Nee
Oh..such beautiful ending Luu!! |
I want to add but no more can i add but your a great poet |
I hate to compare you to another poet, but Melpomene's & your styles are so similar and equally amazing. I get addicted to your poetry & hers so easily. Anyways, another really awesome write. The "To the man, I hate, to love." was the perfect ending & was extremely powerful. Another awesome write from you, filled with emotion --wonderfully done. |