Walking

Wow, You're in the place that I'm striving to get to. Where you can see everything clearly and everything has meaning. This poem has a deep meaning. I especially liked the way you ended
"My only purpose was to walk.
I wonder where the wind will take me..." Great job!

I agree with Cayce. It was a very great write, and makes one realize that they should actually open their eyes to see the world around them. Did that make sense? I hope it did. xD

For so long I have
let moments pass me by
as I live my life behind
closed eyelids.

^^ that is so true... we truly live with our eyelids closed...

I wanted to walk today
to see what lies beneath the grass
to wonder what hides
behind those bushy white clouds.
I may never find out
then again I may already know.

^^ i just loved these lines... it only makes me feel what i have been missing all these days... too busy to even look around me...

My only purpose was to walk.
I wonder where the wind will take me...

^^ the wind may take you anywhere... just loved it :D

quite an inspiring write is
beautifully penned...

This piece is interesting and seems just like your thoughts tossed on paper. At times seems random and complicated and messy, but perfect in a way because thats how thoughts are. I loved the poem for the most part and wouldn't change much, but there was a part near the end of the first stanza.

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"let moments pass me by
as I live my life behind
closed eyelids.
Never again...
My eyes are open
and I can see clearly".

Your poem doesn't rhyme almost at all and theres nothing wrong with that, but I think when you can chance a couple words around to give it more flow its always a good idea. So I would maybe say...

let moments pass me by
as I live my life behind
these blind eyes
never again
my eyelids are open
and I can see clearly now.

Don't even have to change it really just a segestion haha great job though 5/5 GG23

'as I live my life behind'
^I think you meant to say 'lived'

'I wanted to walk today
to see what lies beneath the grass'
^This was really interesting..kind of a mystery.

'I can see their importance.
Stars are not just yellow lights
and raindrops are not just
sky fallen tears...

Everything matters now
Everything will always matter.'
^Very nicely done. Powerful lines especially the last two here. They convey a powerful message.

This poem was really interesting. It sounds like you are rather confident and optimistic about the future and what is to come.

Well done.