Comments : I'll Try

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    We all at times have to try and hide our hurt and pain behind a smile so no one knows how we feel. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by nikki

    I like it! cant wait to read what else you have written!
    ~nikki~

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I LOVE the song "Smile" ! and I love this poem . Its very touching... Keep smiling Walah! Lol. Youre a wee gem... and a very talented poet :) Well done.

    Lol,
    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    An emotional yet personal piece, written wonderfully without a doubt. 5/5, Em