Just A Puddle [Nothing More]

by BlueEyedMystery   Oct 18, 2009


Sparkles made of frost
Linger..
On once warm lips.

Melt me down.
I want to be your ocean.

Swim through me.
Let me liquefy your dreams.
Make the heavens
Scream.

Drip
.
.
Drip
.
.
Go the tears.
Never again.
Oh, never again.

I wanted to be your ocean,
But I'm just the puddle you stepped in.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow, I LOVE this poem so much! Good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I really like how it ended.
    this is truly a "perfect" poem.
    5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kiko

    This is quite a water-world of sadness you have penned here. It is just dripping with emotion. Nicely done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Deana

    This was short and yet very powerful! very cleverly thought out, nice ending!

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    Highly imaginative and poignant at the same time. The opening and closing lines are killers!

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