Her Story part 2

by Kianna   Oct 19, 2009


Filled with sorrow...
Drowned by darkness...

She calls for help..
Will you help her??

Tears fall...
Blood spills..

How much longer 'till some one realizes her pain??
Does any one notice the sadness in her eyes??

Or do they not care...

She's still searching..
Running from the truth..

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  • 15 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    So good for such short poem i likey sad though i can relate =( 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    I can tell from my personal experience that people can be very mean and egoistic. The more you show you care about them, the less they care about you. It is why no one, but the people who have been reading me recent poems know that I have been depressed for a while, and that I still am. Sometimes it's annoying when no one sees the pain inside, but sometimes it gives me peace, I don't like bothering my friends and family with that.
    If this poem is about how you really feel, than PM me and we could talk if you want.
    5/5 on this one too. It continues the first one pretty well.
    Take care