I felt this was a very unique poem, although dark and mysterious it wasn't boring or sloppy. The flow was well down and the imagery I felt was perfect. I could invision every word/thought and I could almost feel the pain within the words. Excellent job 5/5

I got a good image off your poem.. It was well written and had excellent flow throughout the entire poem.. Karl pretty much said it all above. Wonderful job. It kept me hooked throughout the entire thing.. Good job 5/5

*whistles* i have never seen a descriptvness about a personal nightmare quite like that man. Very Descriptive, i actually saw what you where looking at and felt the sorrow weave in and out of the melodic word flow
Amazing job
~Raindrops
5/5

An excellent write, so intense , I could feel the hopelessness and the sadness, which is to me a great talent, when you can motivate the reader to feel! very very Well done!

This was such an intense poem. I love the imagery and how dark this is. I feel like you did a onwderful job telling your story. Your stanza were flawlessly crafted and contain some really amazing diction. I'm glad I read this. Nice work dear :) Nik