by Michael D Nalley Oct 20, 2009
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Agreements come in many forms and amounts |
by trippetta TC
I loved the line "Lord help me respect the ones in charge" It seems that as a nation we are always at odds with not only the hierarchy, but divided by the illusion of someone else being in charge of our individuality. Well written. |
by kelleyana
This poem let me take a hard look at our actual society. |
WELL WRITTEN.. no more can i add for the great poem like this. keep it up |
by SolemnWish
Conformtity in a way. |
Definately some true words in this poem, the ones who are highest up hold all the power while we play by their rules. No wonder the world has become what it is... Excellent job none the less and great flow and rhyming, you know I love that shit haha |