Definately some true words in this poem, the ones who are highest up hold all the power while we play by their rules. No wonder the world has become what it is... Excellent job none the less and great flow and rhyming, you know I love that shit haha

Conformtity in a way.
I hate conformity so this poem is a perfect example of my logic haha.
I cant seem to play by other people's rules so I try to play by my own.
Great poem 5/5

WELL WRITTEN.. no more can i add for the great poem like this. keep it up

This poem let me take a hard look at our actual society.
I like every bit of this poem. There's nothing left to say, other than it is absolutely wonderful. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

I loved the line "Lord help me respect the ones in charge" It seems that as a nation we are always at odds with not only the hierarchy, but divided by the illusion of someone else being in charge of our individuality. Well written.