One last chance

by osmish   Oct 20, 2009


The danger in my agenda
Is to be your defender
But the changer in my calender
Was not protecting you in december
Cos i was force to remember
I slumber in november.

I should have been your ranger
And allow no stranger
But i surrender,cos i was tired
So i was inspired to retire
But all i acquired was shame
And it transpired into guilt.

So i just want to inquire
If you have the desire to rehire
If your love for me has not expired
If you still admired the moment we share togerther
If our memories has not wither
If we can still be birds of feathers

Cos i made a blonder
And cannot help but ponder
How many times i squander my chances so i wonder
If can get one last chance

One last chance to say,i am sorry
One last chance to say,i miss you
One last chance to really be your man
One last chance to show you and me are meant to last forever
Just one last chance,

[pls don't only read this poem also rate and vote if u like it.if u don't pls send me your comment.]

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    I was very impressed how you managed to make everything ryhme in this poem. It's very unique and it has a smart rhyme to it. The stanzas were nice and neat. However, I think that in a poem, you should say "because" instead of "cos." It just is more formal and it sounds better :)

    The danger in my agenda
    Is to be your defender
    But the changer in my calender
    Was not protecting you in december
    Cos i was force to remember
    I slumber in november.

    Whooooa. That's really cool how you made eery thing rhyme...again. lol I really like that part.

    Well, overall, I really enjoyed this piece. It was very unique and it showed off your shining talent! Very nice work. 5/5

    P.s....sorry it took so long for me to get back to you.

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