Wow, I love this. I like how you wrote an inspiring and beautiful piece about (I think) cricket. It's such a wonderfully writeen piece and it made me think how beautiful sport can be put down in words. Flawless. 5/5, Em

Great job!!! i like this poem 5/5

I think you did a pretty good job here, i could visualize what you were talking about and though I am not a big sports fan, the subject didn't deter me from the stanzas. I think you could tighten the flow up a bit to make it even better but overall you did a nice job, good work.