Wow this piece is very good, your chioce of wording was perfectly suited to the style of the poem. All your stanzas flowed into each other very nicely and I would have to say the fourth is my favourite =]
Again brilliant work

I liked this a lot. Esp. the imagery and how you personified Death. 5/5

"Wounds so deep pain fades away
Death's chill muffles the crying
You can bleed out your dismay
However, you might die trying."

I liked this a lot. Esp. the imagery and how you personified Death. 5/5

"Wounds so deep pain fades away
Death's chill muffles the crying
You can bleed out your dismay
However, you might die trying."

I think I would have called this poem dark not sad as it might lead to dying of sadness.The vivid imagery you paint is wound up in the last stanza giving birth to a good poem 4/5 RAY S

This is something I know nothing off....my way of getting rid of emotional pain is running or simply walking..sometimes I do it up to three hours a day..as long as it takes for the storm to die down.

You wrote this well, good wording and well portayed emotions.

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Whats death when you've got nothing left to fight for? When I come to that point in my life I'm going out swinging too haha Good shit 5/5

Wow... this is such a powerful poem. It really hit me... I love the line "Beginnings require conclusions." You should add that to your quotes! Well done ..

Ahhh....eerily truthful. Very nice rhyming.

Great poem. I really like the fact that I could tell the emotion...I love it.

Great poem. I really like the fact that I could tell the emotion...I love it.

Congrats on winning the contest! Great poem, I especially enjoyed the continuous imagery and interesting word choices. "What star signs have you crossed?" <-- This brings to mind Romeo & Juliet by Shakespeare. Star-crossed lovers. My favorite word in the entire poem is 'lugubrious,' and you used it correctly! Excellent work. I would add a comma after 'deep' in the first line of the last stanza. Other than that, flawless write (by my standards). Keep writing!