by Beautiful Chaos Oct 21, 2009
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Woman down upon her knees |
!!!!!!!!! |
by Lonely Rider
A powerful and thought provoking write... |
by Deana
Jenn, this is really beautiful...and the rhyming is perfect an excellent piece! |
by HidinVictim
This is really pretty, I don't know if i fully understand it but it seems like its about different religions and the struggle to decide which to follow.. I loved the ending powerful and if I understand it correctly the ending touched me in a personal way.. anyways great flow and the imagery was lovely as well... 5/5 |