I'm nominating this poem it was amazing :) 5/5

I like the images you have created here. Its
like watching a movie. Good job with this
write :)

This poem took me by surprise...extremely well written indeed and somehow, because you kept it small the pain oozes out in such a profound way....

But it never occurred to you,
To leave before loving her

^^
That is so true...how people think they can built new happiness upon someone elses broken heart is beyond me...

Well done!

5/5 Ingrid