A nice example of the Loop form that Hellon created. I really like to use it and you have done it justice. Spring is gone for a while but we do have the memories and won't be long again before it is back. Well done.

This was really well done. Very imaginative and original. Nicely done.

Well done Raj :) This is a beautiful poem... and so well done. I love the form ... its brilliant... and so is this piece! Loved it .

This is written with such ease and flawless
flow. LIked the read..beautifully sad.

Beautifully penned Raj, from the first line to the last. I agree with Rainbow, your wording was just too profound, too beautiful.Probably this is the one form i would gladly try..

Well done..

This truly was a beautiful Loop poem..it did not say so in the title, so cought me off guard...even though you repeat the words, it is not forced and this is even more of an achievement because the lines are really short....very impressive, both in skill and also in quality, because it is a very beautiful poem.

God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, i really loved the last stanza. good work. :)