Comments : Mary Jane

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Amazingly written with so many powerful words. I loved the end stanza the most
    "Fresh new skin over bruised up veins.
    Looks like heaven, but poisonous taste.
    Acidic veins like my first hit of meth.
    My high is gone and my drug is pain."
    Very good job, flawless, 5/5 from me. Em.